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 Room_mate: shirish ko katha
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Posted on 03-02-04 12:18 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Mina didi afno bidya_waridhi ko silsila_ma “nepali mahila ra youn soshan’ bisaya ma sodh patra tayar parna, 6-8 mahina Nepal jane hunu bhaye pachi malai parnu fasad paryo.
Yetro Boston ko chewai ma, Somerville justo thau ma eklai le hazar-hazr dollars, mahina ko, tirnu paryo bhane, rat-rat bhari paharadari garera kamayeko paisa le ke khane? Visa maintain garna,c ommunity college lai kasari paisa tirne?
“baru Mina didi, tapai_ko kotha ma ekjana kasailai rakhera janu huncha ki? Malai ni sajilo hunthyo, tapai farkera aaunda yehi aauna paiincha, tapai ko saman baru mero afani kotha ma rakhau la”,
“Huncha ni, shirish bhai. Aan tyo mero sathi Meera le bhandai thiyee, kunchahi euta nepali le kotha khojdai cha bhanera! Sajha ma pani halya thiyo re, kasaile response garena re! Bada kukha bha’cha re! Sadhai yeta oota kotha sarda sardai hairan cha re!”
“Besai bho ni ta didi”
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Jeewan; mero naya room-mate. Oomera le ma bhanda nikai pako hunale “dai” nai bbhanda besh hola. Hoina ta pathak brinda?
Jeewan dai, tourist visa ma America aaunu bhako ani over stay garnu bhako re! Achel yehi kaam saam gardai hunuhuncha re! Oohan Nepal ma, afnai business thiyo re, tara Maobadi ko karan le business sukera eta tira barallinu bhako re ! yo bhanda aru details malai thaha bhayena, thaha paune mero ruchi pani bhayena!
Khana pani banauna na_aaundo raiicha oohan lai…Ramen chow chow chahi thikai ho!

Oonhan lai bhat nakhaii chitta bujhdaina bhannu bhako hunale, ma rati kaam ma janu aghi bhat ra chicken pakaunthe. Je hos, afulai pani sasto parne, majja le masu bhat hasurna paaune bhayeko le, sadhai pakauna malai kunai sankoch lagena! Khana maile matra pakaye pachi, oohale kames kam dishes garnu hola, bhanne aash thiyo tara, din dinai bhada haru “sink” ma thupriyo! Yo pani khasai thulo bhayena , sayad Nepal dekhi ko bani ga’ chaina bhanera chitta bujhaunadai dishes garthen. Baru ekchoti maile, bathrooma safa gare pachi. Arko hafta oohale garnu hola bhanne hisab thiyo, tyo pani galat sabit bhayo! Paisa magna aftyo lagera, grocery ko bill, freeze ma tasi diyen, oohale patakkai chaso dinu bhayena!
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Aba prasanga ali badalun hai!

Mero kotha, apartment ko mool dhoka ko chewai ma bhako hunale, dhoka khuleko, banda bhako sabai kura sunincha, bhanou, thaha paiincha! Ekdin, diunso esso sutna khojya ke thiyen, dhoka khuleko aawwaj ayo! Jeewan dai ta diunso kaam ma jane manche, ko ayo bhanera sochen! Jeewan dai nai rahechan, saatha ma euti, adhabaisen mahila.
“this is my room mate, shirish, and this is Selena”, Jeewan dai le parichaya garai dinu bho.
“Nice to meet you Selena, and don’t tell me you are J Lo.”, mero thatta selena le bujhinan, “so where are you from?’
“Mehico” afanai para le mexico bhanin bhanne bujhen maile.
“so you guys work tagether?’
“No”
Jeewan dai tehi oobhi rakhnu bhako hunale selena sita aru kura garna chaina. “I will see you later” bhanera ma tirkiyen. Afno kotha ko dhoka thunera, rat bhari feri jagram basna, sutne taiyari gardai thiyen.
Yesso nidaye jhai ke bha thiyo, tauko nira ko vitta bata “dhyak” “dhyak” awaj ekohoro aayee rahyo. Nidra ko soor_ma bhai chalo ho ki justo pani lagya thiyo. “Hoina raicha, jeewan dai ko kotha bata po aako raicha ! Ekchin pachi salena euta aanoutho chicyahat pachi ti dhyak dhyak haru mathar bhaye”
(Yeti byakhya le tyo banda kotha bhitra ke hundai thiyo..sayad pugcha hola..)
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Posted on 03-02-04 12:19 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Raat bhari ko thakaan le sutchu majja sita! Eta ooti awwaj le khasai malai kunai asar pardaina ! baru rat bhari jagne manche lai melatonin ko gadbadi le cancer huncha ki bhanne sochai le kahile kahi nindra bitholcha..tehi ho! Jeewan dai ra salena ko kriya kalap le malai kunai farak parya chaina. Baru, khat chahi tyo vitta bhanda tadha sarya chu! Sancho kura bhandiya chu hai!

Ekdin oothera nepali para ko chiya khanu paryo bhanera kitchen tira lagen! Tyo apartment ma bathroom, kitchen jane dhoka nirai cha! Bathroom bhitra bata khasay khusuk…haso haru niskidai thiyo..ti awwaj haru sita ma chahi achamma mandai thiyen!

Achanak dhoka khulyo…praya nagna salina niski ! bina kunai sankoch malai euta halka muskan chodi! Ma natamastak bhayera oonalai heren, akhir mero pani ta man nai ho. Mero afno pahal ma dekhko ta hoina ni, ho ta? Oonko muskan ko badala maile pani sano muskan diyen!
“sale, ke herchas? Ankha fodi diun tero..herchas arka lai tero! Llauchas ankha arkako lai…laaz chaina tero?” Jeewan dai jangidai afno kotha tira janu bho.
Mero ke galti thiyo ra? Tapai bhannus ta?

Bholi palta phone ayo…salena ko rahecha
“Hi this is salena..Is Jeewan there?”
“No he is not” maile bhane.
“ he is a rich man in Nepal, right? He owns his own business and has a farm and lots of land and tractor? Do you know about him?” salena le sodhi.
“I am sorry, I don’t know much about Jeewan” maile bhane.
“did you see me yesterday?’ sodhi nirlajja bhayera.
“No” bhane.
“do you want to see?”
“no” bhanera phone rakhidiyen. (“Yes” bhannu parne thiyo ki hai?)

Tes din pachi maile khana banauna chadi diyen. Ma bihan raat bhari ko chowkidari garera farkera aaunda, sadhai justo duiwota glass, wine ko bottle haru bhetchu. Dining table ma pizza ko khali khol nafali rakheko bhetchu…ti sab safa garne chaso rakhina !
Bathroom ko kamot ma pahenla ta ta haru kramasha badhdai chan…
Kitchen pani kasto ganaune bha cha…garbage ma pani sayad kira parya hola…
Cooking range pani fohor na fohor bha cha…
(Tyo san safa garne kaam merai matra ho ta? Tapai bhannus ta?)
“America justo thau ma aayera pani, yestari basnu parne ke bhagya hola?baru arko apartment khojera yehan bata sarnu parla ” bhani sochdai thiyen, tiringa phone ko ghanti bajyo. Mero diunso phone khasai aaundaina, testai jeewan ko pani. (Ke dai bhannu testa lai hai).
“Hello”
“Hello, America ho?” receiver ma prasna suniyo!
“ho ho”
“teha Jeewan ji hunu huncha?”
“ko bolnu bhako tapai?” anayesahi sodhen maile!
“ma jeewan sir ko srimati, khoi cha/cha mahina bhai sakyo oohan America janu bhako, jamma ekpalta foon garnu bha’cha…amrica jana tikat kinna sapat linu bhako paisa pani tirnu parne..khoi..malai yehan khyaun khyaun pari rakhya chan…ahile nai le paisa bhanchan..jhan tetro biswas garera diyo…sani chori pani khali “baba khoi?” “baba khoi?” bhanera dikkai parche! Affoolai yehan chinta surta le raat din ekai bhako cha!” Eutai swas ma yeti dherai kura suna_eeye.
:Ekchin Hai” bhanera Jeewan dai ko kotha tira lagen…tyo banda kotha ko dhoka bata oohi poorano awaj aayee rahya thiyo “dhyak” “dhyak” sathma, salena ko malino chitkar.

Mero man ma ke ayo kunni, ma farakka farkiyen ra bhane “ jeewan dai ta hunu hunna”.




 
Posted on 03-02-04 4:09 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nice story, this reminds me of the tons of my so called friends. They would call me up and say, "Meera we are coming for dinner." So of course the goody old me used to clean up, cook, lay the table and wash the dishes." I got friends coming over frequently, mostly Nepalis and Indians. So one day, direct as ever, I was like "If you guys want to eat, help me cut the meat of wash the dishes." Needless to say, my visitors have diminished by leaps and bounds :-)


 
Posted on 03-03-04 1:22 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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meera,

You are free to interpretete , timro khusi.

But the point I was trying to emphasize is Jeewan (imaginary) dai's relationship with that women from Mexico, while he has a wife in Nepal.

The rest of the story is just sexed up.

Shirish seems to have compromised in the past to cook, clean up the kitchen and bathroom and since that incidence he just refusing to co-operate.


 
Posted on 03-03-04 6:11 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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That was a bitter yet realistic portrayal of life. Keep on writing Shirish dai :) really enjoyed it.
 
Posted on 03-03-04 9:10 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Certainly a bitter reality, Well I thing most of us has gone throught some of the realities mentioned in the stories if not all of them

I belive in diffierent reality than Oys. If Wisdom brings sufferings I would rather mount on Both of them...
 
Posted on 12-03-04 8:53 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I thought to pull it since there is another thread going with the problems of ROOM_MATE
 
Posted on 12-03-04 5:01 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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" Mero diunso phone khasai aaundaina, testai jeewan ko pani. (Ke dai bhannu testa lai hai). "

shirish ji,

kath ramro laagyo , keep it coming. Sajha ko pooltice guph ra khutta taanataan bata dikka bhako moorkha malaai aaja musukka haans woothyo. Jiwan dai kheladi po rechhan ta bujhi lyaamda
 


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