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 Let me be your eyes!!
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Posted on 07-08-04 7:24 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Let me be your eyes,
My mother had always told me not to play with sharp objects
As a child I didn't listen, who does anyways?

I still remember the first time I touched the flower
It was so soft and delicate,
I was too afraid that I would tear it.
The morning sun that touched my skin
I knew I was glowing with twinkle in my eyes.
Closed my eyes, for no apparent reason,
Felt the wind blowing on my face
So pure and fresh.
Even though it was just a feeling
There was a brightness within my soul
That no words can ever describe.
I felt you holding my hand
Smiled to myself,
Isn't life beautiful?

It's not a sickness that anyone can cure
It's not a wound that will ever heal,
Until I dieý.and
One day I shall see the world like everyone else.
The blue sky where the birds fly so high
Different colors that will make me fall in love
Various shapes of every object I shall see,
No longer will I only have to suspect.
Not only will the mirror look at me,
But I shall look back at the mirror.

But for now the time has stopped in my life
Twenty four hours a day, seven days a week
Surrounded by nights, darkness has become my only friend.

 
Posted on 07-08-04 7:28 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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nescient, have you ever thought of putting all your poem in poetry.com. you can get awarded or what not at the place! keep it up!
 
Posted on 07-08-04 8:38 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Awwwww that's sooo touching, made me cry.

One special request, can you write one happy poem, about anything will do, just let it have a touch of happiness in it !!!
 
Posted on 07-08-04 11:23 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Posted on 07-08-04 2:19 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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u stole my words meera, why do we get to hear only saaaaaad ones from her?
aba ta necient ko naam dekhyo ki uraath laagera aucha, pheri kunchai dukha bedana sunna parne bho bhanera :-p but that does not keep me from reading her poems. wow.
 
Posted on 07-08-04 2:25 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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to a blind mother frm his son

"i can see world in you eyes"

yb
 
Posted on 07-08-04 4:02 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Redstone: It was really nice of you to say that.Thank you very much.

Meera and jpt: Will try to come up with one,for you two :)

Angel: Plz,don't be :(
 
Posted on 07-08-04 5:40 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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This nescient will never get publish anywhere.

She always steal from others. She get caught 2 times in Sajha before. So be careful. I don't trust her.

Sattya bolne charo = Prem Charo
Hawaii :)
 
Posted on 07-08-04 5:41 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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prem ma lagda brain pani charo jasto udyo ki k ho!

man pari bolne charo=pram charo!
 
Posted on 07-08-04 6:11 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Prem Charo: Let me clear it once again,one was for the four lines that I used in one of my poem which wasn't mine.It was put into quotation and had informed the original writer about it.At first the writer wasn't happy but later the writer was okay with it.Other one was for writing "When a person talks to God.It is called a prayer.When "God" talks back to him.He is given the name schizophrenic " I assumed everyone knew.I read it when I was in high school and as most of the people here are college going students and/or graduates I thought it wasn't necessary.But my bad and I did apologize for not quoting.


 
Posted on 07-08-04 8:38 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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nescient ...sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeettt..:o)...well the poem was...dyam .. the way u can depict so much feelings..though words...:o)...
but well..urgghh hoping and waiting for a more..u know happy one..:o)...it will come one day...i know..it has to :o)..

anywys this is for prem charo...

Oi..!
poem na leknu sakney l*ro = premcharo
sattya bolne gaff diney l*ro = prem charo
aru lai chor bhanney l*ro = prem charo
aru lai trust nagarney l*ro = prem charo
hawaii ko naam chalauney l*ro = prem charo
gannu nabulnu l*ro = prem charo
bhakwaz history dhekhaunu khojney l*ro = prem charo
facts taha nahuney l*ro= prem charo
close minded l*ro = prem charo
conclusion ma chito auney l*ro = prem charo
thapauney manchey jasto act garney l*ro(bhatoh paltiney l*ro) = prem charo


saabley taha cha banana ho bhanney = dananah :o)

(ps that was me 1st try at a poem ;o)..well at least at smthing that rhymes...hehe no hard feelings hai...if u can say smthing to others..others can say smthing to u too..hoina?...la i think u be writing to me now..cheers :o)..)






 


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