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Posted on 07-23-04 12:20 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Place: a Library in Boston
Duration: 30-45 minutes

I was trying to study for my exam. A pretty girl probably in her twenties came and sat infront of the table where I sat.
I could not stop looking at her and you may want to call it stalking.

She was wearing tank top. Got her cell phone and looked at it and kept it over the table, near the books.

got her rubber band from the back of her head and bit it partially in the mouth and let loose the hair.
She moved her head, got all her hair at the back and with both hands arranged the hair to a pony tail and wore the hair band.
She opened her books and flipped some pages.

She brought the end tails of her pony tail in between her nose and the margins of her upper lips as if she was smeeling her hair or as if she was trying to make a psuedo-moustache. She carefully untangles some strains of her hair and I could see a large portion of sclera of her eyes as she was trying to get the view of her hair probably way up on the head.

She threw her hair back again.

She flipped through couple of pages of book and highlighted couple of lines.

She scratched her head near the temple and with the palm of her hand, kind of patted her hair near the vortex of head. She took out a mirror probably 2 by 3 inches in dimention from her backpack and checked her image.I could almost feel the faint smile that spread through her pink lips. She checked her lips by pouting and looked like with some difficulty, checked her hair in the frontal area and tried to rearrange some strains of hair. They would not stay in the desired place so she took the rubber band off the pony tail and letting them spread over her back.

She ran her hand at the back and looked like she felt something open and pulled her tank top down. I could not see what she was exactly trying to cover.

She got some strains of hair on her hand and started playing and rolling as she kept glaring her eyes on the book she had. She rolled those few strains of her on her left index finger. Her hair must be real long because her index finger was barely visible. she let that strains of hair go and I could see them getting curled.

She kind of kept her head down and all the hair from both sides fell on the book. She turned the head on one side and with the help of her right hand, she managed to move all the hair from right side to dangle on the left side. She ran all her fingers close to scalp and with one smooth stroke, she ran those fingers from the roots of her thick, silky hair to the tips.She did the same thing again but that time some some bunch and kept close to the nose as if she was enjoying the smell/ scent? of her hair. She then threw all the hair on her back back.

She then adjusted the strap of her bra and tank top which nearly fell from her shoulders.

she straightened her head and looked towards me. I quickly took off my eyes from her to my books. But I think she caught me gazing at her. What ever!

She took out a kind of clip from her back pack and bite it in between her nice pearly white teeth and rolled the hair on the left hand, held it in position and with right hand secured the bun tightly with the chopstick like clip. Still some strands in the front, probably not long enough to be incorporated in that bun were hanging in front of the face and she neatly tugged them on her pinnae of ears. Checked the mirrors once again. First She took out a brush then comb to comb the hair in the front.

She checked her cell phone. Took a deep breadth and tried to make some note with her left hand on the hair at the temple area. I don't know why she took off the clip, which had kept all the hair off her neck and shoulder and prevented from collection of some heat and let the hair go. She shook the head and I could see the hair moving from side to side like a cascade. She bent her head on the side and let all hair fall. Kept running the fingers from the root to the tip of hair. Got a bunch of them and looked at them, slid them in between the index and the middle finger repeatedly before she threw them at the back. Ran her hand at the back and fixed something.

Suddenly the phone vibrated and I could clearly see the wide smile on her face_ almost like Virgin Atlantics ad of Boston to London. She quickly took out her brush and mirror again. She combed the hairs on the sides first, bending her head and letting the hair flow freely on the side. Then the back and finally the front area. with her hands, she threw the hair back and shrugged her head couple of times.
Quickly, she packed her books and the accessories and as she turned her back, I saw a nice tatoo of a pattern, showing over her low rise pants.
 
Posted on 07-23-04 12:47 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Shirish:
Good job.
But, wait, I have a few questions/comments for you:

*Did you talk to her at all?
*Did you take notes of her actions on the spot or you remembered all this?
*Did you feel the urge to tell her how beautiful her hair looked?
*Did you get any homework/studies done?

DP.
 
Posted on 07-23-04 7:38 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Hee hee...

Good questions DP.. ;o)

I think our friend Shirish has an eye for detail..n is a great observer..or he was so bloomin bored of studyin watevr..he felt like charging his batterys observing the pleasant distraction sitting in front of his table..hehe...made me chuckle as i was readin...nice descriptions Shirish...;op

Domi
 
Posted on 07-23-04 8:46 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Sirish bro.....dude...that's a nice piece in there....been there done that in the college library.....you explained it so nicely that I was imagining "the girl" right in front of me........nice one....very nice piece........don't have words to compliment you........
 
Posted on 07-23-04 9:28 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Shirish
Are you sure that was her hair or a WIG??
 
Posted on 07-25-04 8:09 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Hi DP

*Did you talk to her at all? No.

*Did you take notes of her actions on the spot or you remembered all this?
I did not take any notes. May be her actions left impressions so deep chap on my mind, I did not have to take notes. I was quite fascinated by her capability to manipulate her hair. Not bad ehh!

*Did you feel the urge to tell her how beautiful her hair looked?
After you asked this question, I realized, its the hair of a women that defines her after face, breast and bodily figure and may be eyes. In songs or gazals, its not possible to describe a women's breast (for the reasons of obscenity), no matter how wonderful they looked, but the hair seemed to be an easy answer after eyes. Her hair was definitely beautiful, like at some point her silky hair flowed in such a way, as if she was modelling for for some advertisment of worlds best shampoo. At one point, with her both arms reaching to tie the hair at the back with, the exposure of the navals with some ornament and lifted breasts, was quite an impressive scene.

*Did you get any homework/studies done?
after she left yes. But the images kept on lingering in my head till I wrote that.

Dominatrix, Ram Prasad,
Thank you.

Hunk_in_grave..
I could not touch her hair but my eyes tell me they were 100% natural.




 
Posted on 01-26-07 1:29 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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this one is for ..Capt Haddock.

Mirror mirror on the wall, who's got the nicest hair of all.
 
Posted on 01-26-07 1:41 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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LOL Shirish, great write-up! Thanks for sharing. I hope there wasn't a missus or a girlfriend then brandishing her broomstick for casting eyes on others like that! :P ha ha ha

As for the appeal of beautiful hair, you nailed it there, man, just nailed it! :) I am with you totally.

Good seeing you around and happy Fri!

:)
 
Posted on 01-26-07 2:14 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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what an observation !

I didn’t know such a boring time pass moments and movements could be
portray so beautifully .
Awesome piece !!!
 
Posted on 01-26-07 2:15 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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wow ...sirish..:)
 
Posted on 01-26-07 2:23 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I wish someone was writing about my gray hair too :)
 
Posted on 01-26-07 2:55 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Edited Version
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Place: a Library in Boston
Duration: 30-45 minutes

I was trying hard to study for my exams in a public library . A pretty girl probably in her twenties came and sat in front of the table where I sat.
I could not stop looking at her and you may want to call it stalking.

She was wearing a tank top with spaghetti lace with straps of undergarment visible. She took out her cell phone from the pocket book and looked at it and kept it over the table, near the stack of books.

She took off her rubber band from the back of her head and bit it partially in the mouth and let loose her hair. She shook her head, got all her hair at the back and with both hands arranged the hair to a pony tail and wore the hair band. The cleavage was more pronounced.

She opened her books and flipped some pages.

She brought the end tails of her pony tail in between her nose and the margins of her upper lips as if she was enjoying the scent of her own hair or as if she was trying to make a psuedo-moustache. She carefully untangled some strains of her hair and I could see a large portion of sclera of her eyes as she was trying to get the view of her hair probably way up on her fore head. “There were no more tangles”- I wanted to tell her.

She threw her hair back again.

She flipped through couple of pages of book and highlighted couple of lines with her fluorescent highlighter.

She scratched her head near the temple and with the palm of her hand, kind of patted her hair near the vortex of head. She took out a mirror probably 2 by 3 inches in dimension from her backpack and checked her image. I could almost feel the faint smile that spread through her pink lips. She checked her lips by pouting and looked like with some difficulty, checked her hair in the frontal area and tried to rearrange some strains of hair. They would not stay in the desired place so she took the rubber band off the pony tail and letting them spread over her back. Her hair must be so silky that it flowed like a water fall.

She ran her hand at the back and looked like she felt something open and pulled her tank top down. I could not see what she was exactly trying to cover.

She got some strains of hair on her hand and started playing and rolling as she kept glaring her eyes on the book she had. She rolled those few strains of her on her left index finger. Her hair must be real long because her index finger was barely visible. She let those strains of hair go and I could see them getting curled at the side of her oval face.

She kind of kept her head down and all the hair from both sides fell on the book. She turned the head on one side and with the help of her right hand, she managed to move all the hair from right side to dangle on the left side. With all her fingers close to scalp and with one smooth and continuous stroke, she ran those fingers from the roots of her thick, silky hair to the tips. She did the same thing again but that time some bunch and kept close to the nose as if she was enjoying the scent of her hair. She then threw all the hair on her back with both of her hands as if she was modeling for some shampoo.

She then adjusted the strap of her bra and tank top which nearly fell from her shoulders.

She straightened her head and looked towards me. I quickly took off my eyes from her to my books. But I think she caught me gazing at her. What ever!

She took out a kind of clip from her back pack and bite it in between her nice pearly white teeth and rolled the hair on the left hand, held it in position and with right hand secured the bun tightly with a chopstick like clip. Still some strands, probably not long enough to be incorporated in that bun, were hanging in front of the face and she neatly tugged them on her pinnae of ears. She checked the mirrors once again and smiled. Then, she took out a brush then a comb to comb her hair, in the front.

She checked her cell phone. Took a deep breadth and tried to make some note with her left hand on the hair at the temple area. I don't know why she took off the clip, which had kept all the hair off her neck and shoulder and prevented from collection of some heat. She looked better like that but she let the hair go. She shook the head and I could see the hair moving from side to side like a cascade. She bent her head on the side and let all hair fall. She kept running the fingers from the root to the tip of hair as if her fingers were big afro type combs. Got a bunch of them and looked at them, slid them in between the index and the middle finger repeatedly before she threw them at the back. Then she ran her hand at the back and fixed something.

Suddenly, the phone vibrated and I could clearly see a wide smile on her face_ almost like Virgin Atlantics ad of Boston to London. She quickly took out her brush and mirror again. She combed her hair on the sides first, bending her head and letting the hair flow freely on the side. Then the back and finally the front area. With her hands, she threw her hair back and shrugged her head couple of times.
Quickly, she packed her books and the accessories and as she turned her back, I saw a nice tatoo of a pattern, showing over her low rise pants.
 
Posted on 01-26-07 2:59 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Some people would call you a pervert. Not that I would. :-)
 
Posted on 01-26-07 3:28 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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interestin piece Shirish!! very very descriptive...i'd say, jus like everybody else!!
wonderin...i don think u mentioned the color of her hair?? i imagined dark shiny black, no highlights...tell me it was black n not some blonde/red!!:)
 


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