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Bhinazu
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Posted on 11-08-04 6:34
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Here it goes: रक्सि चुरोट नखा भन्थ्यो बुढा पाकाले धुम्रपानमा तक्मा पायो हाम्रो काकाले माछि मार न हो माछि मार न हाम्रो काका आइपुग्यो तमाखु भर न पानि मुनि पानि माथि पुतलिको छाँया बाइकी आमाको भन्दा पनि तमाखुको माँया माछि मार न हो माछि मार न हाम्रो काका आइपुग्यो तमाखु भर न माछि मार न हो माछि मार न हाम्रो काका आइपुग्यो तमाखु भर न हस् त दाइ धन्यबाद!
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le chef du nuit
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Posted on 11-08-04 1:50
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Dada Giri
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Posted on 11-08-04 4:08
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Bhinaju, Nice Haiku! The upper 2 lines are sufficient in my view. रक्सि चुरोट नखा भन्थ्यो ni Hai बुढा पाकाले धुम्रपानमा तक्मा पायो lau हाम्रो काकाले le chef du nuit , Originally Haikus are short poems with three lines and with 5 letters in the first line, 7 letters in the second line and 5 letters in the 3rd line. When it extended to other countries from Japan it slightly changed. In English they may not strictly follow the rule of 5-7-5. In case of Nepal we have Muktaks that resembles with Haiku (Of course but not the same). If you sing this song short and short form like a Haiku, It resembles with Haiku. Obviuosly it doesn't follow the rule of 5-7-5.
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Dada Giri
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Posted on 11-08-04 8:02
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I add mine too: Friday Changaa sari bho Aaaja yo mero man Haatma Dhan Saturday Bihana bhari Suteki chheu he pari Hunna yasari Monday Haat ra khutta kampna thalyo lau mero Bill tirdaima Rest 4 days are left for other friends to add.
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kdee
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Posted on 11-08-04 11:41
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tuesday alarm le oothayo snooze hajar choti thichhay aba mc ka paun :-)
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Sarala
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Posted on 11-09-04 5:30
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Teeharko Haiku भेलेनी आइन् ५ आगन गुन्यु चोलो ७ मागान लौ न । ५ हे औँसी बार ५ गाइ तिहार भेलो ७ हे औँसी बार । ५
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