Sadhai bhalo nai socheko thiye
Timilai naramro hune garera
Ke nai po gareko thiye ra?

Timro biswas mageko thiye
Ra chokho mitrata mageko thiye
Timro jawani nai mageko thiye ra?

Ho, hamilai samaya le tadha puryayo
Kohi arunai milne sathi bhettayechau
Dherai pachi dekhda nadekhe jasto garyau,

Mero chitta bujhauna lai ek choti
Nazar milayera musukka hasidiyeko bhaye
Ke nai po bigrinthyo ra?

Good one kalanki bro.

I loved the second line........dyamm touching

Lau ja, Jagalety lai katro choot aba... hehe.. MM le tyasto gahira mutu dekhi nikleko awaaz lai Kalanki bro ko naam deko .... Jagaltey mathi anyaye :(

Kalanki bro pani sabai ko maan ma chaune.. lol..

IndisGuise:)

काम गर्ने कालु, मकै खाने भालु भन्या यहि हो
hehe.. Kaa MM bro, If only I could write poems... If only... hehe.
Jagalte bro might be thinking --
म चाहि जगल्टा फिंजाई फिंजाई कविता लेख्ने।
MM bro ले जगल्टेलाई मोरो कलंकी देख्ने।।
म चाहि कलम चपाई चपाई मनको बह पोख्ने?।
MM bro चाहि तारिफ गर्दै कलंकीको नाम खोक्ने ??

That's unfair... eh.
La jagalte bro, harip cha yaar... ban ko kanda lai tikharnu parcha bhanya? Naam nai jagalte, bob dai le jasto diii halne hola ni :D

sorry hai jaglte bro.............Hijo beluka ali champagne, rose, red white and shooter ke ke mix ke mix.............aaja bihan hangover....pheri morning mai champagne bruch.......ke garne HK time ahile 2.30 pm ..still jhyaap....

sorry hai.......contact lense na laideko ............testai hunch

maaf pau ..........

hera na bro jhyaap bhaye pachi brunch ko spelling pani wrong.........hahahahahahahahahha

MM bro ani lense ko spelling pani milena :))
LENS hola :))
ehee kehi chaina bro..
sabai chalchha Saajha ma ani nepal ma :))
Foe

Anyaya ra atyachar ko parakastha nai nagyo yeha ta. Prajatantrik mulya, manyata ra aadarsha ko khullam khulla upahas bhayeko cha :). Prajatantra mathi nai thulo shadayantra ho yo, ra yo pani Grand desing antargat nai parcha. ra yesta prakriti ka gambhir ghatana mathi nispakchya ruup ma chanbin hunenai cha bhanne kura ma ma biswasta chu :)

Jhukkine MM bro ra jhukkeko kura smaran garaidine Indisguise bro ra Kalanki bro sabailai dhanyabad. Krishmas ramrai manayiyeko cha bhanne thaha pauda khusi lagyo :)

P.s Bhut kaal ma farkera herne manche ta ma pani haina, tara hijo tuccha tuchha lagayeko bela man yesai baralina gayecha. Thank u all for sparing yor precious few seconds.