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Posted on 04-02-05 7:57 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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although grounded in some truth about my life ,its basically part of fiction.
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last theory session i was attending in my college life.and it sure left me nostalgic.everyone was quite..don know wether i was quite or whole class was quite .but that excitement which i used to fantasise while dreaming of my last
day at college was lost somewhere.I just wanted was to sit there for a while and remember those moments in silence.
As i looked on desk i could see our name carved on it...stupid of us trying to make that name last for ever...
i rememmber ujwala sayin....hami 4 jana nai chora chori ko name same rakhne laa?(let's give same name to our children)
chori bhaye kusum .well seeing that name on desk i looked at them..they were quite,
pretending to be excited.
after a while paras handed me his auto.i took it with smile..."thank u."
he smiled and went to his desk. .it was like fashion during those days ..filling auto.i wondered why that auto was empty but
felt too bore to ask him...i just wrote the song "puranee jeans aur guitar"wrote my name and returned it .
everyone was busy ...everytime our teacher use to shout at us...hoina!!machabajar jasto katti halla garerakheko?!(why are u all
making noise...it seems like fish market)..but that day whole class was quite .teacher also noticed our melancholy in silence.
as bell rang ..we closed our bag .teacher informed us to come on sat for farewell..everyone started moving out of class.
ujwala said;jane hoina jam(let's go).
i said ; jadai gar la mero kam cha ma ekchin ma aunchu.(u guys go on..i'll go after a while)
.ujwala;ohki thn see ya tomorrow aunchas hoina ghar?(come home tomorrow )bye
i said bye ans stayed on empty class for a while.
thinking all those memories which lasted for whole two year.my bench from where i use to tease sarmila ,irritate bikash,
chirag's unique hand shake ,anjana ko sahid kanda...everything was their..my project work..all..my amusement,spirit,hardwork,tranquility,
vivaciousness...everything on same class which i passed for whole two year.
as i started moving out of my class..college was quite as abondoned area ..as i walked along the extensive hallways.i walked down the
down the cafeteria,looked at didi (cook) who was so sweet.
with smile i said "didi ramro sanga basnu laa"(have a good day.)
she smiled back.."has has nani aundai garnu la bhetnu"(keep on visting)
i smiled and moved out to courtyard.my sneakers felt heavy as i walked through the cafeteria..as i stood judt few
feet away from open door.i stood there for a moment ;it was only minute or so but it seemed like an eternity.
turned once ..looked closley towards my college which was standing and waving me good bye...
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Bhitra goyera, special ko face herda pani buda ko nai face dekhincha ra po dikka laagne..............funny harkedai....he he he.... katai tyo someone tehi principal ko daughter ta parena....he he ....

 
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LOL harkey dai. special ko anuhar ma pani principle dekhnu thalnu bhayo areee!!kasto bijog condition raichaa..
thx aeutiketi for dropping by...
continued...

with thoughts on my head i kept walking same path ..my silence church way...as i walked closer.
i saw paras infront of the church gate...i was shocked!
he was leaning against the wall with his hands jammed in his pocket,looking down ..
as he soon as he saw me he smiled and walked towards me.
i said;aree!! paras,i smiled and asked;kaslai kurerakheko ?(waiting for someone?)
he said;nah; was praying .
i said; uh huh.
i was quiet debating wether or not to go on my own way.i glanced at my watch it was 2:22pm.
hmm i cleared my throat.."should i leave u than.."
he said.."was waiting for u.i knew u would come this way.so i kept waiting u here."
i asked him with ackward question;why?hmm so come to say good bye then?
he said,yah..couldn't go without seeing u?
well i smiled and asked him;how did u do ur finals??
he shrugged ,bio is not my cup of tea.how abt u?
ohki i guess.
i essayed a small smile.
another shrug,we'll see,he sighed.
what??i asked.
its hard to believe isn't it?he asked wistfully.
what?
part of our life is over ruina.2 yrs sure went fast.
yes ,yes they did i said feeling suddenly as heavy load has been placed on my soulders.
i smiled,i slouched forward and took out deep breath.
i am sorry he said unexpectedly.
huh??
i coudln't see ur dance on welcome programme last time.
ohh,its ohki..it was bad..dont talk abt it.i said with smile.
he searched smth in his pocket..."did u lost smth?"i asked.
here,hmm this is for u.i thought it slipped out of my pocket.well i made my way here to give u this letter.
whats that?i asked.
he turned slightly to my right side so that i was facing him.he looked at meh and said"this is for u"
well i was in dillemma... i kept asking myself.would he be angry if i dont...would it be appropriate if i just ignore abt that letter.my heart was not excepting and my hand was moving forward to get that letter. i stopped suddenly
and asked "whats in here?"as soon as i was abt to reach he moved it out of the way before i could take it.i looked at him with mixture of confusion and curiosity.
"it is for meh isn't it?"
yes yes..it is he siad.but i need u to promise me something.
what?
he gazed into my eyes"promise me"
he said haltingly "that u wont open this until u reach home."
i want reply on farewell day.
my eyes narrowed a bit why?
he pulled envelope bit farther way .promise me.he said imploringly.
i sighed...
ohki,i promise.he placed the envelope into my free hand .i accepted with confusion.and wordlessly.
looked at my watch it was time for me to leave.breaking the silence that had come between us with jarring insistent dinging sound'
well i said;i should go now.see u on sat thn,
he said ohki see ya.
i turned towards the road and started to make exit.as i did i felt marty tug at myhand .i didn't looked back.


 
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Nice narration Ruina..keep good works going...mero aali fursaat nabhayekole lekhna bhyairakheko chhaina..aali lekhechhi post garchhu hai..keep waiting...;-)...
ANyways..GOOD to see ur works...
Take care,
Nirman
 
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Greatttttttt....Ruina le pani khatara lekhdo rahecha story ta...clap clap clap .......he he
"...would it be appropriate if i just ignore abt that letter.my heart was not excepting and my hand was moving forward to get that letter"....is it accepting or excepting...confused!!! ......Bhanepacchi Kucch to feeling tha Paras ke liyee....he he he

"ohki,i promise.he placed the envelope into my free hand .i accepted with confusion.and wordlessly.".....Paras le po don't see what is inside bhanee promise garayeko thio....hamlai bhanda ta ke nai hunthyo ra tyo inside ma ke thio bhanera.... he he he.....

"he said,yah..couldn't go without seeing u?" Malai ta paras ko po maya layera ayyo....

 
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ruIna ji, the male character in ur "non-fictional", ta mai hu ke kya hO?aamai, malai ta saachi, aali aali sanka lagna lagyo!!!.....
yar, yo ke aapat aai lagyo, are u really......, no u cant be her?

OMG...are u really her? :DDD....i m soo excited....+ u know wat, nevermind

nevermind, again
ruinaji, continue w/your life(last day of ur college)...i wana hear some more,
then i will jump to the conclusion...

;)...<--- wink ho hai

pease ;ut
 
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katai tyo someone tehi principal ko daughter ta parena>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Ardent, bro, kaaas yesa ho sakta tha. Bhaako bhaye ta gajab nai hunthyo ni. Kyarnu ra bhanya, aafnu principal ko yeuta chora, ani arko chai combined, ke. Mix, duitai chora pani chori pani, combined. Bhagwaan lai duita banauna aalchi laagera ueytai packet ma pathako re, kya. hehehehehehehe. Buda le student haru kt sanga hidya dekhyo ki ghurera herne, aba k bhannu. Tesh mathi buda ko chamcha haru le yeso kt haru sanga ali ramro sanga boleko dekhyo ki k k adbingo thapidine, k k ? Malai ta dikkai lagyo ni college ta.


Ruina jee, good work, very nicely presented. I love the way u wrote. Remined me of my school days. lol. those days were funny.

Last ma don't say that was a love letter ni, Its a old school method ke, i don't believe u guys were using it in college. Surprise for me. Well wateva, nice story ke.

What did u say to paras ? That i think would be more important ni, hoina ra. I just wanted to know, what did u say to that guy. Is this a real sory or fiction. Real bhaye, I have lotta questions for ya ke.

Hope to get reply soon.
 
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nirman.............>>>>
thank u ...inspired by your writing:o)

ardent.............>>>>
thank u ..thank u ..thank u:)))
milayera padhnu nii;)ahile lai chai confusion durr garnu ko lagi bhanidinchu its accepting.


no way ji;.............>>>>RuIna ji, the male character in ur "non-fictional", ta mai hu ke kya hO?aamai, malai ta saachi, aali aali sanka lagna lagyo!!!.....
yar, yo ke aapat aai lagyo, are u really......, no u cant be her? .....>>
nop hunnai sakdaina he never said me ji;) u are confusing me with someone else. hehe

thanks ,herdai janu k huncha.

harkey dai,............>>>>
thank u :)
Last ma don't say that was a love letter ni, Its a old school method ke, i don't believe u guys were using it in college. Surprise for me. Well wateva, nice story ke. ...........>>>>hehe hernu la k hunda raicha...
ur word reminded me of april fool love letter,and rough paper they use to give to gal to scare her for while...that was funny..but trust me i am not talking abt that stuff :)



 
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as i reached my home..as usual mom was waiting for me at lunch..
i was feeling tired,haven't eaten anything since morning.didn't felt like eating.
sat next to mom and said "muma khanu nai man chiana."(mom dont wanna eat)
she yelled at meh;"k bahncha ..bihana pani khayeko chaina kaha nakahe!!khau ma pani kahnchu."
well that makes mom also hungry since morning...for her sake had to eat something..
haas alikati matrai paskisyo hai?.(put only small amount)
after having my lunch went upstair in my room,reached inside my pocket and pulled out slightely ceased envelop.
i was curious to see what was inside that letter.
few lines was written on it;

"IT'S HARD TO TOLERATE THE PAIN ANYMORE.I CAN'T STAY WITHOUT SAYING THAT I LOVE U"
"

well i knew something like that was in that letter.i just wanted was to be sure by looking through my own eyes. he was good guy,decent person,dont know much abt him..since he rarely talked with me.i wasn't prepare to accept the relation at that time..carrier was everything for me.i badly wanted to be something on my own...for that i am sure i didn't wanted any kind of distraction on my way.i didn't knew what should i answer if he was not my friend i would have ignored him like i did to other guys..but he was my friend ...he use to understand me.didn't use talk much but i knew he was always
helping me in small ways which i had to notice sometimes even if i tried to unnotice it.

every practicle class he was beside me.i noticed him looking at my image in window and whenever i looked at window he use to pretend like fixing his hair.it was ackward so i never looked at window again..use to give me notes when i was absent for class. he was kind of quite guy..sometime i wonder if something was bothering him from inside...but never tried to talk about it .

strange! till day before he gave me that letter he was just a paras for me.now today why was i thinking about him so much.why everything he did feel like something special to me?i never really cared wether he was fixing his hair or looking at me,but after i read that letter feels like everything he did was for me.
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next day i went to my friends house.my best friend...i took that letter.
ujwala,paras proposed meh..i said with sad face.
ujwala shouted ; god!congrats..he is such a sweet guy..i wish he had fallen for me.
i looked her with anger and said k bhancha!(what are u sayin)
and i teased her,man parcha bhanee bhandeu ma?!(tell me if u like i am gonna help u out)k thaha tero secret admirer po ho ki(who knows might be ur secret admirer).
ujwala;nakara(shut up)..merai deepesh nai thik cha malai suhaunee.(deepesh is perfect for me)with kinky smile she replied.
sachai bhanna na ma k bhanu?(seriously, com on tell me what should i do)
well i was planning to go abroad..not still decided what was i suppose to study.i was planning to study mba in australia.
.or do mbbs ani how can i accept his proposal?!
ujwala ;do u love him?
love aree!!i dont know what is love u dummy.talai nai tahha hola ni ta experience bhako manche(u should know abt it..u are expericed in this matter)
ujwala;khoi malai kehi nasodh...ta afai j j bhannu cha usko agadi ayepachi afai taha huncha(dont ask me anything,i cant help u in this matter,dont worry u can manage it)

well was all confused whole day..next day was farewell party thrown to us from juniour student.my friends were excited abt dress they were gonna wear well i was busy thinking about reply.i dont know what really love was.i dont know why was i taking that letter so seriously
why can't i ignore as i used to in past.whats wrong with me..gezzz that was so distracting.
next day came...i was awake till late night..i was worried about what should i wear at party.formal dress was compulsory ..and meh dumb gal dont know how to walk on sari..i tried different coloured sari but at the end i stuck on my favourite blue
one.

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next morning,my 4 friends came to my house..mom was helping me with my sari .
i was hidding from them
ujwala;oye bhayeena bhaneko(aren't u ready yet?)
i shouted ..no not yet ..dont come inside i am not ready..
god it took meh around 45-65 min to wear that sari and walk in my own room.
..i was feeling shy to go all the way to campus with that sari
i was not sure how was i suppose to walk but strange thing is i managed all the way to my college..
everyone were looking faboulous..i was scared of meeting him..i was holding sari with my one hand and ujwala with my other one.she knew i was nervous.
as we entered the hall. light entered us with spectacular display of defaint colours before it reluctantly beat a retreat.
i was looking down ,feeling shy to face everyone ..as i passed along the hallway.
hello ruina"
familiar voice was heared from somewhere behind me.i turned around slowly until i faced him ..
hei !i said with my nervous voice.he got up from one of the few chairs that had been placed in hall and gave me shy half smile.
"can i talk with u for a while "he said.
ujwala looked at meh,i was all nervous..i looked her with scared eyes..and replied soflty"ya sure why not!"
ujwala said ...ma ekchin deepesh lai khojchu hai(i'll search deepesh).and she went away.
i was feeling ackward...no words came into my mind.
"u are looking gorgeous"
i smiled and said thank u.
he gazed into my eyes and i could feel my heart pumping..i was speechless(never been like this before)
ruina?
hmm said ackwardly with my nervous face.
soo??
he reached out with his right hand and fixed my blowing hair and looked shyly...
what's ur answer....
i was all confused,wracked with insecurity,nervous,scared.....
i said in very softly voice.....i am sorry paras.
simplicity of that answer contrasted with cascade of emotion that ran through his face in that single moment
from passion to dissapointment,sadness,distatful.
looking at him i felt so cruel..god i felt like worst person ever.but i had to do what i had to do
he smiled sadly and walked out of hall
.i was left alone standing in the hall feeling bad at what i did ..

that was worst farewell i ever had.after that we were like unknown,unseen..i sat on hall trying to
look as happy as i could,ujwala knew what i did..she came by my side and said..
hey i knew u would do that.what u did was good..
she might be being good to meh..but i felt what i did was bad.

after few months i had to leave for my further studies...i got letter from him.
it was like before, few words;
"I AM GONNA MISS U"


the end;)
ani yasto bhayeecha reh hahahha.kathaaaaaaaaaa sakiyo;) pheeewww!!

 
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Wah wah ....kya story...hats off to Ruina re kya....he he he ....ok now i will analyse some sentences of the story.....i love to do so if it is LOVE STORY ...he he he ....

few lines was written on it; "IT'S HARD TO TOLERATE THE PAIN ANYMORE.I CAN'T STAY WITHOUT SAYING THAT I LOVE U" ...............i just wanted was to be sure by looking through my own eyes>>>>>>>> Ok this shows Ruina was expecting something like that from PARAS one day ...ever since she felt she had crush with PARAS.....but she did not mention about it though....but gave a hint of it....like mentioning about those mirror reflections.......


love aree!!i dont know what is love u dummy.talai nai tahha hola ni ta experience bhako manche>>>>>>>>......he he he ...pahilo pahilo pirati ma yestai dialogue bolchan....good narration


i tried different coloured sari but at the end i stuck on my favourite blue one>>>>>>>>>> sayad PARAS le tyo letter nadiyeko bhayee...surumai blue sari lagayinthyo ki....???....he he he



i was scared of meeting him..i was holding sari with my one hand and ujwala with my other one>>>>>>>.....i think it was not the scary matter...but you started caring PARAS ...i think...


he reached out with his right hand and fixed my blowing hair and looked shyly>>>>>>.....great caring guy PARAS....


i said in very softly voice.....i am sorry paras>>>>>>......I bet you had feelings for PARAS...and still u said SORRY to PARAS....poor guy....GRRRRRRRRR to you for that rude answer.....there were other ways to express it if you didn't like him (though i know you liked him)


i got letter from him. it was like before, few words; "I AM GONNA MISS U" >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>....sorry PARAS....that's life......i know u probably be humming this sayari....especially for you PARAS

aaj fir dil hai kuchh udaas udaas
jaane kyun ek mayusi si chhayi hai
aaj fir palkon pe pani hai
bheer mein hoon fir kyun ye tanhai hai !!!!











 
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Ruina... your story touched my heart.. I can realte to it so much.. Well not because of the proposal.. but the friends.. and the farewell...

When I was 12 years old, my parents decided that I was hanging out with my frens too much and my studies were going down the drain..( I managed to pass on my finals in suxth and seventh standard... tara I sucked..!) So on went the journey to find a proper school in India for me... I was pretty excited, but I was an immensely timid and shy kid... and a school was ultimately found... I didnt know that the big impressive building would be my one for five years and that I would come to love it...

Though we got severe punishments.. and our warden would hit us with a fat stick all the time... and I thought that place was hell at times, we even had a name for it.. Our school was called VDJS... and we transformed it to Very Dangerous Jungali School... hehe it sucked that bad... But if I had the chance I would do it all over again.. whenever I think of my frens.. of the time I spent there mt heart starts warming up and and I have a feeling of Nostalgia...

After five years when I was graduating from there... I was the prefect there for 2 year, so I was told to give a speech on farewell... I still remember how I cried on stage and more than half of the 1000 students were cryong along with me... I knew most of them by names... man.. I miss those days like crazy..:(.. I miss my home, the place that moulded me into the person I am... some great things happened there and there are numbers of stories to share... tara will do that some other day..

Thanks Ruina for taking me back to all those memories....:)
 
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Hmmm nice one Ruina ji, Life is a journey.......got to travel with u or without u.....hehehehehe ..ki kaso?

And Rythm Ji,Impressive. Looking forward to read ur stories too.
-nivaN
 
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Everyone.... telling their stories how cool.... :) Carry on when you all are done i will come with mine hehe. So please do take your time. ;)
 
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Nice love story Ruina jee, didn't know u had a hidden talent in u. This is awesome.


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Ruina jee, I think u were afraid to fall in love, not afraid to ruin your career. U used career as a shield to protect urself from falling in love and suppressed ur feelings, bout that guy. If u don?t mind to answer how is the relation with this guys now ? ( I don?t expect him to be ur boy fren now????????? OMG that would be funny hehehehehehehe)

This is too long reply, not my type.

Aru pani jaaos na ta Ruina jee.

 
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Ruinaji

Well written. But I feel sorry for the poor guy. Did you not have any feelings for him then you should not have accepted the letter in the first place. His hopes would not have shattered......I can't imagine how he felt after that......poor Paras.

Ruinaji, do you think you did the right job?? Do you at times not regret from your decision then?

Kya kare, dil yo majbur chha, no matter what life must continue haina ta?


 
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Aww Ruina such a nice story.
 
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Ruina, indeed nice narration!
 
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Some comments I would like to jot down here?..but first?very nice narration indeed?can be felt through heart...touching and with vivid details?Keep writing Ruina?You do it best!!!!!!
Love would be very complex word to analyze?sometimes it feels just that simple, and at times it just becomes so much complex, we just feel way out of it. The love itself can occur in million and zillion ways?the love we feel for parents, the love we feel for family, the love we feel for our pets, the LOVE we feel for friends and the LOVE we just feel for someone special, the thin line separating the feeling of LOVE for friend and special someone?and in between these love I find most illusions. I find myself so confused, as they say "To be great lovers you should be good friends first", but when the thin line between friendship and love is mistaken, it makes such a horrible cocktail.
Ah!!! For the special LOVE, Sometimes it just happens, and we feel it more strong with the days passing by and sometimes, it happens, we fail to recognize it and when something worse struck us, we remember that love, and feel it precious, and most of time it would be gone, gone along the wind of life, and all that remains is the wind-chimes singing the song of that love. Alas!!! Our heart cries, and seeks for it?but it remains unreachable.
The happiness and the relations then start to seek new meanings, and it is there we start being more complex. But the love itself is so simple; the simplicity touching the heart.
There is always that simple love for each of us, somewhere out there; we just need to seek for it and we will find it someday, that?s why they say, "The pairs are made in heaven".
NIRMAN

 
Posted on 04-04-05 7:49 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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ardent;
wah wah kya analysis cha,clap clap re kya.hehe
thank u so much for ur great work...may be u are right,may be u are wrong;)

nivan;
yup shouldn't stop...
man paraunee hajar bheteenchan juni katnee eutai huncha......etc etc.

rose sis;
permission granted;)

harkey dai;
Nice love story Ruina jee, didn't know u had a hidden talent in u. This is awesome....>>> malai pani thaha nai thiyeena until u told me it was hidden talent;)
meh being afraid of falling in love aree!! hehe i afraid of being commited hahaha.

If u don?t mind to answer how is the relation with this guys now ? ( I don?t expect him to be ur boy fren now????????? OMG that would be funny hehehehehehehe) ...............>>>>hahhaha nop.. he is not my boyfriend .



forget-me-not;
Well written. But I feel sorry for the poor guy. Did you not have any feelings for him then you should not have accepted the letter in the first place. His hopes would not have shattered......I can't imagine how he felt after that......poor Paras.

Ruinaji, do you think you did the right job?? Do you at times not regret from your decision then?

Kya kare, dil yo majbur chha, no matter what life must continue haina ta?
..........................>>>>>>>
yup right ruIna shouln't have accepted that letter at first place...thats huge mistake she did.she just wanted was to be sure re ni taa as story demands some sequence :)l.that letter would have been goodbye letter also ni hoina ra??as he told ruIna he came to say good bye...tyo pani ta bhannu milcha ni.ki kaso?
ruIna is not sure wether she did right or wrong..but ya she should have known that was love letter.so that all those scene wouldn't have created in farewell.
nop she doesn't regret for her decision.


meera,sitara;
thank u :)

nirman;
thank u nirman:o) .i was just trying to sketch love story in my mind..and slowly it turned like this.

thank u everyone for those kind words ,question,analysis................>>>>

its basically work of fiction whereas few details i mentioned are grounded in some truth.


 
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rythm;
thank u for sharing ur story:)
it was nice to read.

 
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Hmmmmmmmmmm... I don't know how I missed this one. Lajawaff cha. Once again epitomizing the fact that more simple and pure the narration, much effective it can relate to the readers.

I feel for Mr. Paras, but having said that, we all take some knocks in our life. And beside the pain of one sided love/infatuation shall be much better (??) that the one for love unrealized, simply coz one has to not only live the pain of just loving someone, but also the anguish of that special someone's love lost. At least in the former, sangai baseko, tee bachaaa kasam wadaa iraadaaa, kichi michi, and hundreds of cheezeeee irrational kura ta hundaina. Hahahaha... je sukai hoss ramailo hudo ho.:)

And me glad, ruina rejected Paras. For the people in lop with Greek tragedies, don't worry, paras is happy and has already gone thru 3 satisfying relationship:).hehe. As of ruina, Shez happily in lop with yours truely ;).

So sabai khusi ma antye hune sathi bhaiharu lai khusi pardai mero dui sabda yehi tungauchu. :)

Once again, Ruina... the story was awesome. Liked it a lot.

Kehi 'na'jest kehi 'in' jest,
IndisGuise:)






 



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