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Posted on 04-07-05 5:38 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Love this so wanted to share.

I went to a party, mom,
I remembered what you said.
You told me not to drink, mom,
So I drank soda instead.

I felt really proud inside, mom,
The way you said I would.
I didn't drink and drive, mom,
Even though the others said I should.

I know I did the right thing, mom,
I know you're always right.
Now the party is finally ending, mom,
As everyone drives out of sight.

As I got into my car, mom,
I knew I'd get home in one piece,
Because of the way you raised me, mom,
So responsible and sweet.

I started to drive away, mom,
But as I pulled onto the road,
The other car didn't see me, mom,
And hit me like a load.

As I lie here on the pavement, mom,
I hear the policeman say,
The other guy is drunk, mom,
And now I'm the one wh'll pay.

I'm lying here dying, mom,
I wish you'd get here soon.
How come this happened to me, mom?
My life bursts like a balloon.

There is blood all around me, mom,
Most of it is mine.
I hear the paramedic say, mom,
I'll die in a very short time.

I just wanted to tell you, mom,
I swear I didn't drink.
It was the others, mom,
The others didn't think.

He didn't know where he was going, mom,
He was probably at the same party as I,
The only difference is, mom,
He drank, and I will die.

Why do people drink, mom?
It can ruin your whole life.
I'm feeling sharp pains now, mom,
Pains just like a knife.

The guy who hit me is walking, mom,
I don't think that is fair;
I'm lying here dying, mom,
While all he can do is stare.

Tell my brother not to cry, mom,
Tell daddy to be brave,
And when I go to heaven, mom,
Write "Daddy's Girl" on my grave.

Someone should have told him, mom,
Not to drink and drive.
If only they would have taken the time, mom,
I might still be alive.

My breath is getting shorter, mom,
I'm becoming very scared.
Please don't cry for me, mom,
Because when I needed you, you were always there.

I have one question, mom,
Before I say goodbye,
I didn't ever drink, mom,
So why am I to die?

This is the end, mom,
I wish I could look you in the eye,
To say these final words, mom,
I love you and goodbye.

Author -Anonymous :)
 
Posted on 04-07-05 5:45 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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read it smwhere before :o)..but thanks for reminding me of it ..i had forgotten about it :o)...

dyam stop always reminding me !!!GRRRRR!!!;oP hehe...

mum...agree with me or not...but yap mum is the most special person out there :o) ..even than dad(sorry dad hehe..hope u aint reading this if not...dil more than thousand pieces huncha ;oP)well...u all better feel the same way about mums!!!!!GRRRRRRRRR!!!i demand it!!!!!!!BHUJIO!!!!!!!:o)

other than that...im speechless..cos of the poem :o)...
 
Posted on 04-07-05 5:47 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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dyam stop always reminding me !!!GRRRRR!!!;oP hehe...
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I am glad i am helping to refresh your brain hehe.
 
Posted on 04-07-05 5:54 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I wish people listen to the mom's daughter. One more stanza from my side:


Oh! forgot a thing mom
I have one submission
I chosed the one who drank
tell my sister not to repeat
the mistake which I did.
 
Posted on 04-07-05 8:25 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Sis. I read this before too and lovded reading it.. wanted to read it again tara din find it anywhere,... thanx for posting it :)....

Ani danny jyu abba dekhi hajurlai dai hoina bhinaju bhanna paryo ki k ho???baaaaaaaaaaaaa jahaa Rose wahi main bhandai pachi parya jasto chha!!:O
 
Posted on 04-07-05 8:28 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Well well well,
Very interesting, in these days mother son and daughter party together, whats the big deal .......lol
 
Posted on 04-07-05 8:29 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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By the way, nice work, keep it up, gurl,
 
Posted on 04-07-05 8:32 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Hey, i thought that u wrote the poem, my bad, any way nice one,

 
Posted on 04-07-05 8:37 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Oh sir...ru blind or what....read understand cry and reply hehee. Scroll up once more and feel it.
 
Posted on 04-07-05 8:43 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Mind Blowing, Very Touching...thank you for sharing. !
 
Posted on 04-07-05 8:53 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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well Madam, poem is nice, thats all i say,........... but............................
 
Posted on 04-07-05 8:54 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I really like to read, ur own work, if u have one ........................
 
Posted on 04-07-05 8:55 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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very touching poem....we all need to be reminded every now and then
thank u rose
 
Posted on 04-07-05 9:38 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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wow Rose jee. thanx for sharing. It really touched my heart, and liver.................. liver chai kina ???????????????????????????
coz i am thinking bout drinking now...................................hehehehehehe.
man man man,
the bottom line of the poem, u drink and drive, u live ;0) u drive without drinking u die:0(

I don wanna die soon. I wanna live.

c that guys, does it make sense to u ??????????????????????????? guess it does.
Don't worry for DUI, nothin is more importan than this god damn life.

DON'T SAY NO TO DRINK AND DRIVE.

CHEERS.

 
Posted on 04-07-05 3:44 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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this world is infested with selfish population..so i think the drunk person selfessly help get rid of a burden...otherwise earth had to enforce another tsunami......if it had hit a tree and brought it down it i wud have certainly cried more
 


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