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 PRATHIK--PART VI

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Posted on 06-22-05 6:02 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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This is a follow up of the life story of the character I interoduced PRATHIK in the following thread.....

First introduction is the life of PRATHIK-IV

FOLLOWING CONDITION APPLIES:
I. ALL DISCLAIMERS AND COPYRIGHT OF PRATHIK-IV specified in thread
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II. AUTHOR HAS RIGHT TO ADD MORE CONDITIONS IN TIME.
III. SEE II.


What happened to PART V... V will come....... eee....
THIS IS A 3-PART series of LIFE OF "PRATHIK-VI"


=======================PHASE I of PART VI ========================================================
[LOCATION: 3rd and 42nd Roosevelt Ave. NY,NY ]
[TIME: 9:00PM TUESDAY january, xx, 200x ]


{
 PRATHIK had a very rough day today. He is in NY city in business. 4th time in 3 weeks. It has been that problematic with this particular client.
 Pictures starts flashing on his head. He was doing the same thing in 2003. Title is different, Company is different.
 Present company is far better than the old one. He is happy. But he can never be home. This caused a lot of problem in the past.
 Now, he is a free bird. But is it good? He still have not figured it out yet.
}
[
suddenly, his eyes catches a figure coming through the door. he knew her... ... fair complexion. 5'3" amazon... gr8 that's ANAMIKA.
she still looks the same. when was that when he met her. 2003... wow.. its been some time. funny experience.
Last time he met her was in her marriage in 2004. She pulls on the stool; her eyes were on the screen. PRATHIK did not know if she saw him.
PRATHIK have changed. more meat on face, neck. Body has been the same. No belly or WRANGLER.
]

ANAMIKA: Pete, the usual.
PRATHIK: [ ooh... she comes here often. Bartender knows her choice as well.. okey.]
[ she had a martini. ]
[ walks towards her. stops at a hair's distace from her back stoop such that he is breathing next to her ear]
[ whispering] recognize me?
ANAMIKA: [ turns rapidly in surprise; her lips right next to PRATHIK's] my god!!! PRATHIK!!! how are you?
PRATHIK: [ smiling ] great. could not be better. and how have you been? its been a long time. Right?
ANAMIKA: [ liquor has made her red, still not used to it ] I heard what happened. sorry about it.
PRATHIK: [ god everybody knows. it was 2 years ago...] don't be. it was in the making. but anyway... life goes on...
ANAMIKA: [ she looked charming ] I heard you moved? where are you now?
PRATHIK: [ nepalese people they do talk] yes. twice. first went to INDIANA. Now, I am in San Jose.
ANAMIKA: California. weather must be nice? i am still here.
PRATHIK: weather is fine. but I am never there to appreciate and experience it. I am travelling most of the time.
ANAMIKA: Just like that time when you came to see me.
PRATHIK: [ she also remembers ] yup just like that. Except, they pay me more. I travel first class and hotels are better. have a diners club courtesy of company.
[ he needs to find out about her. ] now its your turn. What are you doing? How is SUNIL? [ SUNIL was the guy she got married to] How many kids? work?
ANAMIKA: I work at Accenture. They pay me well. I still have not made it to management yet! [ she did not say anything about SUNIL]
PRATHIK: [ she does not want to talk. what happened?] Where is SUNIL?
ANAMIKA: we separated like 3 months after marriage. officially like a year after. I did not want to withdraw the paper I filed for him.
PRATHIK: [ curious, felt bad ] what happened? I am really sorry. I did not know. U know.
ANAMIKA: I know about you. DEEPAK dai keeps talking about you all the time. He was not happy about my choice from the beginning. He liked you.
PRATHIK: I did not see marrying so soon then.
ANAMIKA: I know. Way I talked with you then, I am sure u thought I was a b****, right?
PRATHIK: It was a short meeting. Lot of unexpected things happened that day. So, i wasn't forming any expression then.
ANAMIKA: Did you eat yet?
PRATHIK: nope.
ANAMIKA: You have lot of catching up to do. Do you have work, tomorrow?
PRATHIK: Nope. mmm.. Actually, I am catching a 7:00AM flight back to San Jose. Then on Thursday I have to go to Kansas.
ANAMIKA: Do you have to be in San Jose tomorrow? if not you can go to Kansas directly.
PRATHIK: [ what does she have in mind? what ever... i will just go with the flow... ] let me check my emails and I will let you know.
[ his phone/palm/laptop everything there.... .] nothing important. I can do that. What do you have in mind?
ANAMIKA: stay over at my place. I have my own apartment. I will make you a dinner. You can catch up on things.
PRATHIK: sounds gr8. Let me call my travel agent. [ its only 7PM in west coast anyway he had a 24 hrs access line. changes his travel itenary]
Lets get going then.
=======================PHASE I of PART VI ========================================================
 

 
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Posted on 06-23-05 1:30 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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thees...
I. i will let ur wild imagination run at every point in next couple of phases.

II. sajha is not a soft porn re kay.. bhanchhan .. .. so cannot write non-veg.. pheri non-veg lekhda.. san dai le ghar bata nikaldiyo bhane bore hunchha yaar.. pheri kahan gayera lekhne... but u can imagine whatever you want at any junctions. I will create enough of those for you.. (o:
 
Posted on 06-23-05 6:51 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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damn didn't prathik move on to different people...still hovering over the bees...hmmmm...its one thing to meet up an ex surprisingly..and another to move in with a reject....ewww....i tell you what prathik needs...we needs to join the bally's (workout and women)....move to san fransisco and take a art class in berkeley( to meet more free spirited women)..and ask for a vacation from work and go to Rome( it's high time for nepalese dudes to get well acquainted with other women, besides an Italian women would make a great wife...and make sure her name is not Romaine Lettuce...ahh boring..
 
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==============P2==========================

PRATHIK: I need to check out of my hotel. we can go together. is that fine?
ANAMIKA: sure.
PRATHIK: [ she is inviting me to just catch up on things or sth. else... ]
[ its a guy thing.. may be grl too... every thing one way or the other leads to.... ]
[ starts thinking.. she feeling sorry for me for what happened with ANURADHA ... ]
{ for readers: DID HE GET MARRIED TO ANURADHA??? LOOKS LIKE HE DID NOT GO FOR PhD. WHAT HAPPENED???? FOR ALL THE ANSWERS READ PART V... (of course when it is posted)}
[ may be a genuine invitation.. cm'on no need to fly with imagination.... ]
what's for dinner? We need to buy anything?
ANAMIKA: nope everythings at home. ..
PRATHIK: [ hotel was 3 block from the bar.. so he checks out ]
[ last time he got picked up by a grl... 2 months ago in GREECE ]
[ He was in GREECE because TELSIM and his company had been going through bitter legal battle over ...]
[ Greek government was threatning to sue his company coz it was a bigger fish... ]
[ anyway he was in SPARTA.. in a local joint and this beautiful broad walks in... ]
[ greeks ladies are good looking.. of course not as skinny as italian.. or french.. but it all depends on u ]
[ btw, PRATHIK was never into skinny grl. he liked to feel the meat ... not the grinding bones ... ]
[ anyway.... she was good ... voluptuous, sumptuous..... he could still imagine chubby face, blue eyes... ]
DESK CLERK: Sir, pls. sign, here.. here.. and here...
PRATHIK: [ thank god this guy broke my .. otherwise.. where would I have been... ]
here u go. Good night and see you soon.
DESK CLERK: will you be back soon? Do you want me to hold the suite for you?
PRATHIK: [ his frequent visit.. has made himself a popular client with this ]
thanks.. but no .. I do not know when I will be back.
ANAMIKA: What would you like to eat? any particular choice?
PRATHIK: [ with a smile ] I am a free spirited person so surprise me.
ANAMIKA: all on me okey.. will try..
PRATHIK: [ her name was Adrienne. ANAMIKA was an amazon than voluptuous. Anyway she was full... he doesnot have to worry about the clanking bones]
[ PRATHIK had a bad experience with this chinese girl. and that was long time ago... thats why he hates skinny ones]
I am going to ask you a personal question ok.. why did you guys broke off so soon?
ANAMIKA: I think we started in a wrong foot. SUNIL did not like the way I talked with him the first day. He had that deep in his heart. He hated me for that. I think he just married to me to show me that he owned me.
PRATHIK: okey, so u try to dominate him the first time just like you did with me huh??
ANAMIKA: [ with a fading smile ] unfortunately, yes... . I never could start over. He never gave me a chance. Next day of the marriage we went to palermo... . That's where he wanted to go. First thing at the hotel.. he does is slaps me on the face. I could not say anything. I had a different vision of a husband.
"i had a vision and rest of the world had bifocals." [ this dialogue remined me of butch and sundance]
PRATHIK: [ spell-bound] sorry to hear that. [ did not know what to say ]
[SUNIL had a Masters in Civil Engineering from Johns Hopkins and worked in NY. ]
[ who would know SUNIL was like that ]
[ his right hand moves to her shoulder. and draws her near hisself as they were strolling towards her apt]
ANAMIKA: [ rests her head in his shoulder and they continue to chug]
yeah... who would have thought? i certainly did not.
[ her voice started to crack. Prathik realized that she was going to cry... he hugs her right there.. ]
[ with her face buried in his chest ..... all you could hear is her sob... he hold her strongly... ]
[ PRATHIK was very heavily set. Only thing he lacked was height. Otherwise, he had a wide chest 47" ]
[ very big for a 5'5" guy. His head was small compared to his upper body.. thus he always dressed ]
[ his-self in a loose dress... no tight fitting.. he did not want to show off (o: ]
PRATHIK: [ whispering ] its all over... its all right now..
ANAMIKA: [ trying to regain her emotion ] sorry.. i could not control myself. we should get going ... rest after dinner okey [ she was trying to smile.. but eyes were watery.. and ... ]
PRATHIK: sure.. lets get rolling. [ he is still holding her hand]
[ jokingly ] can you walk? or do i have to carry you?
ANAMIKA: my feet are fine... its the heart that needs sewing...
[ remeber .. ruIna said heard does not break.(NO GLASSES). it is made up of muscles,
ligaments.. yeah.. it gets torn right?? !!! so need to sew up the damage ]
PRATHIK: [ lauging ] u found a master-tailor. now all we need is a string and needle.. we would be all set.
ANAMIKA: [ starts craking up.. all of a sudden smile is hiding all her past and emotion right underneath]

==============P2==========================  

 
Posted on 06-23-05 11:36 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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hya kati lambai ra..aba kasto patience test garya hola, malai ta kurna bhane bachi pasina aaucha :P
 
Posted on 06-23-05 11:39 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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dude thapap
you should be writing story for kollywood. nepali movie ko standard baad cha
 
Posted on 06-23-05 11:39 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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redstone,
gld u like it.. do not catch to much... let it go.. (o:

yeah yeah.. i had to do the same.. lost my posting couple of time.. i was mad.. so i also write on word before posting..

hushp,
see this guy PRATHIK.. is nepali so i try to mention only his dealing and thought with nepalese people.. i guess that's relevant right?? beside that I could write everything else he does which is very technical and irrelevant too (o:
but anyway.. i would also give u some nice notion as to what he is like.. i am sure u r feeling it in phase 2 above...
 
Posted on 06-23-05 11:44 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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NBCA,
WILL YOU FINANCE?
i was looking for money to feed myself. I can write well (o:
i can direct too... (O:.. I CANNOT ACT though.. bad me..
but at least u got 2 in 1.

DC_GURL...
k garne.. "pratikshaya paachi ko phaal mitho hunchha bhanchhan"
if u hire me to be a full time writer i can chunk a lot of pages. I am bsy with other things
(ruina and rythm are after my case) thus m writing this phase VI.. slowly...



 
Posted on 06-23-05 11:51 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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dude,
i am having hard time paying my tution fee i wish i could finance. but i bet you could find somebody what your stroy like PRATHIK.
 
Posted on 06-23-05 1:24 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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ooof damn NBCA, i was hoping to get a side role in that movie..maybe that barmaid who gets to drink a lot....hehhee
 
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nbca,
y u have 2 fill up a baloon and when its up with high hopes.. punch ahole and bring it down (o:

u gave me an idea..

U KNOW what aFTER PRATHIK-VI that's it.. Sajhites will have to pay me (o: .. nice one huh.. or somebody can buy it. too for the lum sum amount.. What say u? (o: if they want to know the whole story......

me also goin' thru the same thing.. no money.. need some for the next sem.. i dunno wht 2 do in summer.. tough..

hushp,
when and where exactly in boston... ? send me an address okey.. email. or whatever.. that would be fun.. u nn me (o:
 
Posted on 06-23-05 2:49 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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O.K ( not that "ok" just plain OK) :)

I was about to give my consent for sponsoring this glorified kollywood flick, which I must say, I read and enjoyed (thanks thapap, post some more), then it HIT me. Thapap has mentioned that the protagonist of the story travels around the world. Greece, and some implied other nations (badi buje hola maile ;)), add to that weekly travelling within states, with hotel suits and tavel bonuses; boy that would be helluva kollywood movie.

If the budget for ALL the nepalese movies would be put together for a year, or maybe 2; this DREAM is possible ;). Common now, do not be totally disheartened; I would put exactly 1000, if this plan evermaterializes. No silly that was in Pennies ;). What were ya thinking? Be serious now. Hehe.

Especially the "moment of truth" hanging in the balance, I would not hesitate to play the protagonist myself. After all, the stroty 'demands' it. Isn't that what 'they' say when they go for some flesh? Hmmmmmmmm.... I LIKE tat:p

In jest,
Indisguise:)


 
Posted on 06-23-05 3:16 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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indi...
how bout a model plane and a plywood set dyaamm.. y waste so much..

hyyaaa.. gimme some greenbaks... for the story kya.. i need to eat don't I... ??
btw, it has been fun while it lasted okey...

i dun care what u do with the story.. can sell make picture what ever u wanna do. (for I care once i submitted my rights to you).

hey if it pays my bill... its worth a try .. trying to sell (o:

indi.. here offered 1000 pennies... == $10.00 thats a good start. [ that was for the whole volume I thru VI] right ??

anybody wanna out bid him???


 
Posted on 06-24-05 2:15 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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INDI,
when can I meet you for that $10.00

luks like u r the one and only who is interested in buying this damn.. story...

u got a real deal.. myan....
 
Posted on 06-24-05 2:42 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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yo ta tyo zee tv ko dharawahik hola jasto cha ;)

among the cities you mentioned in yor previous stories, you so easily forgot eastern conn. and willimantic, next time chai tyo pani add garnu..then i might considering putting some money too :)
 
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oys,
wilimantic, mystic, wallingford, new london, groton.... (o: ... storrs.. yeah yeah...

if you want the whole one .. out-bid indy (o:
 
Posted on 06-24-05 2:50 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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10001 ?
looks like me and indi are in for a serious penny war here :). meanwhile could u post part VII? aba internet days are numbered u know

 
Posted on 06-26-05 8:16 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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hmmmm,..... thapap i think your writing is great!!!... when is the next part coming?.. am dying to find out what happened!! i mean... well poor him.. his parents forcing him at that age to get married... and well what was the name of the gal again... who he was getting maried to...what happened to her?? curious!
cant help noticing all the gals have names starting with an "A"... I wonder why that is... hehe... anyway keep writing and I'll keep reading!!
 
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oys,
k garne... "kalti ma no dewa.. " tesaile aaba kaam ma janu paryo ke.. " i will post when I get to it okey (o:
tesmathi, $10.01 bhanda kehi offer payena.. no incentive kya...

"MOVING ONTO GREENER PASTURES" (o:


rythm,
thnx 4 the complement. and honestly, i am not stalking you (o:

i am getting curious too why all the girls have their name starting with "A"? I will have to find out too.. (o: ... u'll be the first one to know when I find out okey.

about the NEXT part. I dunno... bn very busy so.. lets c.. will post when I get to it..

This one SOUNDS like "DIBBA MA BANDA FILIM" (o:


 
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hushp,
u know one more thing.. italians (chicks) are also very good at sucking and taking it in their ***... (if you did not know about it).

i am sure they are a good cook and homely { u know better..} { not me no experience here}.
 
Posted on 07-06-05 6:47 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Thapap,

I'm eagerly waiting for ur next part of the story. Is it coming soon? I"m sure many curious readers like me are desperately waiting for it. We are ready for the FINALE just bring it on! hehe
 



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