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 dream man !!!!
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Posted on 10-15-05 9:49 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Her;

It had been along day at work. She impatiently watched the time tick away, anticipating when she'll make it to the gym, as he knew he'll be there again today . She knew his schedule and routine jus like he knew hers. She had made love to him a thousand times in her mind without even knowing his name. He was simply the most handsome man she had ever seen. he stood 6'2,Dark hair and eyes, smooth incredibly beautiful complexion, well toned, strong arms and shoulders and the most heart-warming smile that sent chills down her spine.
She didn't know his name yet but by the way he looked at her, she knew she had found what she had been looking for all these years.
As the clock struck 5, she hurriedly grabbed her purse and rushed out the door to her car and drove off to the gym.
She had on her brand new nike head-to-toe outfit that clearly outline her unbeliavably shapely body while emphasizing her sexy cleavage. She looked stunning as she ran on the treadmill, with her long hair pulled back, her sweaty, shiny, soft skin glistening in the soft sunset light that was pouring in throuh the wide glass window. She knew he was watching her from accross the room, as he went through his weight training routine. Her heart skipped a beat everytime their eyes met, she could hardly keep the pace without loosing her balance.

Him;
How could anyone possibly be that beautiful! He had seen her several times, and each time she took his breath away. There was something about this woman, he jus didn't know what it was. In his time he had seen georgeous women throw themselves at him but she had never felt drawn to anyone like this before.
She didn't show up yesterday and it was the longest day he had had at the gym ever since he landed his eyes on her. Her presence filled his space with such longing and content that he could go on working out for hours as long as he knew she was there. There she was. Ever so graceful, so soft and so feminine and so beautiful!

Her;
She wiped her sweaty face, and body as she got of the treadmill. Today is the day she was gonna meet her dream man, she thought to herself as she stretched and feel the tension of the day lifting away. "I gotta talk to him.." she thought o herself.

"Nice work out!"
She knew who it was before she even turned around. It was a deep soothing voice.
Her heart was beating so fast she could hardly speak. She turned around to meet his dark, warm eyes staring deep into hers.
"you too!" she said smiling.
"Iam Marcus" he said as he extended his arm to shake her hand
"Iam Gene" She said.
"Beautiful city. I've only been here 3 months and i jus feel like its home already"
He said, with a sincere look in his eyes that showed he meant what he was saying.
"So where are you from?" she asked
"Detroit. My company opened a new site down here and we could use all the help we can get"
The conservasation went on for a several minute as they strolled down to the shake bar and helped themselves to strawberry milkshakes and talked some more.
The attraction and connection they felt toward each other was magnetic. They could've gone on and on till the wee ours of the morning if it wasn't for the warning lights that went off to warn members of that it was closing time.
He walked her to her car and wished her good night and watched her drive off knowing he's gonna see her the following day. Lord knows he could hardly wait...


to be continue...
 
Posted on 10-16-05 1:11 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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hmmm...
waiting impatiently for next phase (o:
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Posted on 10-16-05 3:01 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Hehe.. :) good one...by the way one question, why the name Marcus? :)
 
Posted on 10-16-05 4:07 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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साझामा प्रेमको सिजन सुरु फेरि भे'छ...:)... तर यसपाली कुइरेका लपस्टोरि जस्तो छ!!..:P...
अनि के भो???के भो?? चाँडो भनुम न!!!...:D
 
Posted on 10-16-05 5:57 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nice story.... katti pachi was interested in reading a sajha thread sincerely!! I hope the next one comes soon...
 
Posted on 10-16-05 7:31 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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its pretty good...keep it coming ehhehe
 
Posted on 10-16-05 8:31 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Ani...bholi..kahile aauchha???? Chhito na.....feri uni haru ko bhet bhayo???
 
Posted on 10-16-05 7:30 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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to matrix does it really matter Yedi naam Marcus hos ya Makhan lal.. it wont make difference right?
well any ways guys thankx for reading and liking it... the next part will be here by tomorrow i promise hehe....
peace out...
 
Posted on 10-17-05 6:55 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Her;
She could hardly sleep as she kept replaying the events of the day in her mind. His smiling, handsome face lingered in her mind evoking feelings and emotions she hadn't felt in years, since the love of her life left her for her best-friend. The sense of betrayal she had felt had turned into resentment and anger. She had built walls around her that NOONE could penetrate.Many had tried but failed.
For the first time she was allowing herself to feel safe and let her emotions connect with another man . It was a chance she was willing to take.
"Today will be the most exciting day" she thought to herself as she pondered on what outfit to wear to the gym. She settled on an Everlast tank top with matching sweat pants that made her look like a true goddess.
Work was bearable today. She had been so engrossed and preoccupied with her thoughts of Marcus, She didn't even realise it was time to go home.
As she sat in the traffic, she kept recollecting parts and bits of their conversation from the previous day. He was so intelligent, knowledgeable, funny, sincere and a good-listener. She didn't know what she was going to do with herself but she was really, really into this man.

Him;
He was a little earlier than usual today. He knew his angel was about to walk in any minute now. How could someone so beautiful be so humble, smart and kind? He knew he was attracted to her before last night but after their meeting he knew he wanted her. He had to make her his. Shower her with affection, attention, spoil her and if things worked out, love her...........
and there she was. He couldn't take his eyes off her as she made her way through the cardio machines, past the free weights area into the aerobics room where she stretched before her cardio session. She hadn't seen him as she walked in but she knew he was there.
As she looked up from a long stretch, she could see him make his way towards her. He was even better-looking today in his gray sleeveless shirt and navy blue sweat pants.
"Hi there beautiful?" he said as he reached his arms out to hug her. It was their first bodily contact and it sent a shot of electricity all over her body.
"Iam glad you made it" he said.
"Iam too" she replied with a sweet smile.
They talked and joked about their day at work as they spotted each other through out their work outs. They made plans to go to dinner the next day, which was on a friday. They hugged and said their goodnights as he walked her to her car....


She had spent hours trying to find the best outfit and matching shoes. She went through every dress, pants and skirt in her closet. She finally settled on the little tan dress she had bought on a trip to LA and matching strap-up sandals. Results were amazing.
Her long hair was held in a bun. She didn't wear too much make up, just lite natural powder, mascara and colored, shiny lipgloss. Her channel perfum was must-accessory that she wore lightly. Her hearings matched her necklace and bracelett.

Marcus was right on time. Not a minute early or late.
His style was classy and elegant. Deep Brown pressed pants and a matching off brown lite sweater that accentuated his sculpted upper body.
He was amazed at how good she looked and so was she, at how good he looked.

The Tamarind was a popular upscale Thai restraunt in down town Atlanta. It was his favorite spot. He had met several local celebrities including Evander Hollyfield, Monica and even Whitney and Bobbie there. The service was exceptional.The waiters dressed in traditional Thai attire. The setting was calm, quiet and cozy with soft classic Thai instrumental music in the background. The lighting was a soft shade of pink that made her skin and eyes glow.
The food was out of this world. She had honey, coconut chicken with peanut sauce and white Zinfidel while he had lamb and wine.

They talked and talked for hours, hoping the night would never end. He was amazed at how brilliant and travelled she was. She had spent summers in Belgium, Greece and Nice', France. She wasn't fluent in the languages but she had a clue and was familiar with the cultures.
As the night wound down, he found himself staring deep into her eyes and seeing the longing in her soul. It was a wanting he felt himself that could only be fulfilled by the deep spiritual connection he was feeling with this woman.
It had been great night and none of them wanted it to end.
He was very polite to the waiter and tipped him handsomely. He wont even let her leave the tip. It was his treat and he had to take care of everything.
The drive home was relaxing and quiet as they took in the beauty of the night.

It was still early and he had no hurry to go back to his empty, lonely apartment.
With her is where he wanted to be. She gladly took him up on his self-invite to watch a DVD at her place. They watched Meet The Parents and laughed hysterically throughout the movie. She hadn't laughed that hard for a long time. Neither had he.
She got up to change the DVD and was going through her selection with her back turned towards him.
She could feel her heart racing as she smelt his cologne and felt his presence standing behind her.
She could feel His breath at the back of her neck as his hands reached around her waste. She felt his strong body next to hers and she could her body start to tremblin.
She turned around and they gazed deep into each other's eyes as their lips slowly moved toward each other.
At first it was a slow, on the lips touch, that grew into a deep passionate, hungry kiss that set both of them on fire.
She had never gotten this far on a first date before but she knew it was the right moment. She stood there motionless as he kissed her deeper while his hands gently explored her body.
In one sweep he carried while still kissing her and found his way into the bedroom where he layed down.
They made passionate love throught the night, each time better than the last.
She was complete again. The void was gone and she knew he was gonna be in her life for a long long time.

the end.................:)
 
Posted on 10-17-05 7:08 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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nice but the ending is okay... it would be really interesting if you had continued it after they layed down and stuff..Is there any movie about this story.. would be fun watching it lol!:D
 
Posted on 10-25-05 12:33 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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A la mills and boons ;) Yeehaaaaa....
 
Posted on 10-25-05 1:39 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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mysterious ..nice :oD...now pls write about a dream woman so that some ppl who have no idea wat is a dream woman..can get an idea and start dreaming re kya ;oP hehe...

anyways hope it wasnt a story..:o)....arent we all suckers for happy endings?!!!suck me!!wahahaha :o| ok that was not wat i really meant ;oP.....or did i mean that?:o| wahahah ;oP...dyam me !!:o|

anyways good day :oD

*tells himself stop procrastination :oS*
 
Posted on 10-25-05 6:43 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Mysterious great story
 


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