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Posted on 03-11-06 4:17 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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We have updates astitwa.com after long time. with hope we will continue it from now.
just give your comments and views after reviewing the site.
Astitwa.com
 
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Posted on 03-12-06 4:56 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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i was looking this site. thanks.
 
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I looked at your e-magazine and decided it's not worth my time. Why, you ask?

Well, unlike public bulletin board such as Sajha, Astittwa is apparently a magazine in the web, right? So, there is hardly any excuse for bad English.

Within two seconds of my eyeballing your homepage, I found two gross grammar mistakes in the titles of the stories, yes, titles. Can you believe it?

First, your so-called "story of the month". The title is Dance Restaurent: What dancer have to say."
- should be spelled Restaurant with a.
- What dancers have to say or What dancer has to say.

Second, your next story, "Is abortion a human act." That should be humane with e.

Well, I did not want to waste more time reading your e-magazine. If the editor and the authors care so little about their presentation, why should I put an effort to read their crappy product?
 
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.Chatmandude is spot on right.

I went to the website and could not help myself from crying. Not because of the content or the stories in the site, but because of the gross editorial by the astitwateam.

I have written to the astitwa suggestion/feedback people that they should not write if their english skill is equaivalent to that of a sixth grader. Leave the writing to the writers.

The poor grammar, language and sentence structure of the astitwateam is a shame for themselves and is humiliating for us who read such work. Please be ashamed.
 
Posted on 03-12-06 9:54 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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his/her another spelling error on the title of this thread as well.

REVIEW ON ASTITITWA.COM

LOL

You guys suck.

 
Posted on 03-13-06 12:09 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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"We are sure that either one will ignore to talk with her or may be one will misbehave her. Generally everyone have the same feeling for them before but the fact that everyone should realized now is that we all were wrong."

quote from intro para of what dancer have to say!!

i read it couple of times, hard to make sense...need some works on english!
 
Posted on 03-13-06 12:22 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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before we continue on this attack
i say we cut the poor folk some slack
sure they do deserve much of the flak
but at least in effort they do not lack
so,
be not so harsh ye sajha folk
smear not with such sticky yellow yolk
they were mighty hungry, with massive भोक
had just finished their relaxing evening toke
you see,
the effect of the herb is so sublime
makes for a much harder editorial time
sure they messed up a few words but then
is being a shiva-bhakta such a crime?

editors, is my poems good enought to publishing in site?
 
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You are hired Mr. Nuitey.:)

To stand out in the market, got to minimize errors!
 
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Posted on 03-13-06 1:56 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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concerning 'human act' and 'humane act'
i get the feeling that the editors here were striving for the negative (or is it positive) of 'inhuman act', and so its not a spelling error
i dont know if its strictly an error... 'human act' is not oft-used (maybe because so few people engage in 'human acts'?), but maybe its gramatically correct (angreji majors, pls clarify)
but as far as i know, kicking a limp dog in it's gonads would be 'inhumane' while munching on a dead baby would be 'inhuman'.
so in this case, your criticism may be unfounded

जस्ट माई टु सेन्टस्
 
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. and while on the grammar patrol
mickthesick, 'chatmandude is spot on right' is an example of a common grammatical mistake. what we have here is what we call a 'redundancy'. 'chatmandude is spot on' and 'chatmandude is right' mean the same, using both in the same sentence is therefore an error :)
 
Posted on 09-16-06 12:57 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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.Hello Nuite,

Thanks for pointing out my mistake. My humble apologies.

Yes, there does seem to be a redundancy in saying "spot on right". I realised that it would be the same as saying "you made a blunder mistake".
 


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