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 Thank you for giving a reason to live to
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Posted on 06-28-10 9:25 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Thank you. I'll be there for you.

I'm lucky - Lucky to have a friend like you
I'm happy - Happy to have a friend like you.

I was lonely. So lonely, so sad, and blue
now I'm happy - Happy to have a friend like you.

So... Thank you...
Thank you for giving me reason to live for
and thank you
Thank you for giving me dream to live for.

I was gloomy. So gloomy but you made me through
and now I'm happy - Happy to have a friend like you.

So... if you need me, or if someone hurts you
just call my name and I'll be there for you.

So... Thank you...
Thank you for giving me reason to live for
and thank you
Thank you for giving me dream to live for.

Comments and help please. 
English and English lady, both difficult.

"Lord! Lord now, I aint got a friend.
Now one gal is in jail, and the other one is in pen."
- Eurreal Little Brother Montgomery, 1935

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Posted on 06-28-10 9:28 PM     [Snapshot: 134]     Reply [Subscribe]
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good poem!

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Posted on 06-28-10 9:37 PM     [Snapshot: 141]     Reply [Subscribe]
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I am not trying to be over smart or anything. My English sucks too but I think the correct usage is 'a reason to live for' NOT 'to'. I might be wrong.

Ani, it sounds like he/she is more than just a friend
 
Posted on 06-29-10 3:29 AM     [Snapshot: 269]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Hello
      prabhat41, sab_nepaliko_sathi.
                     Thanks.

 sab_nepaliko_sathi, "Ani, it sounds like he/she is more than just a friend  " 

ओहो !  त्यस्तो अर्थ निस्केछ ?   

अंग्रेजि पढेको भन्या ईस्कुलमा "My English" भन्ने हो। पढ्ने बेलामा गुच्चा खेलियो - अैले, अंग्रेजि गोलमाल छ मेरो । फेरि अंग्रेजो सिक्दै छु ।

'a reason to live for' NOT 'to'...

Thanks. 

PS: अरे यार, कसरि, "Ani it sounds like he/she is more than just a friend" please tell... I am more than curious.

मैले त्यस्तो डबल मिनिंग आउने खालको words प्रयोग गरेकै छुईन ।

तर...
नचहाँदा नचहाँदै मनको कुरो पोखिपो हालेछु
थाम्दा थाम्दै प्रितको कुरो लेखिपो हालेछु...

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Posted on 06-29-10 12:36 PM     [Snapshot: 331]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Lol.. dont fly too high.

She will dump you and you will come with another title "Give me a reason to live to.." ;) after few months..

Dont trust in any relationship in USA. Believe me ;-)

 
Posted on 06-29-10 12:40 PM     [Snapshot: 335]     Reply [Subscribe]
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योर फादर एण्ड मदर गेब यु अ रिजन तु लिव | यु शुद् ठेंक डेम तु

 
Posted on 06-29-10 1:18 PM     [Snapshot: 347]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Hello
     Friends!

Thanks for your warm words. I needed that.

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        thanks.

"Give me a reason to live to.."  a great title.

Well... about US America, from what I saw from TV and Movies, there is 2 things I know: Gold Rush and Gold Digger.

You wrote, "Dont trust in any relationship in USA. Believe me"
My ans: Oh! Okay, and why should I trust you.

"Dumping and Pumping = Circle of Life" - Author unkown.
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grgDAI
          वेल... टुडे आई वेन्ट फर अ डाईन-वाईन विथ माई डाड। एन्ड आई थ्यान्कड हिम फर नट ईटिंग मि वेन आई वाज अ चाईल्ड।

पी.एस: माई डाड  वाच्स एनिमल प्लानेट।


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Posted on 07-05-10 1:26 AM     [Snapshot: 482]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Thank you. I'll be there for you.

I'm lucky. Lucky to have a friend like you
and I'm happy. Happy to have a friend like you

So, thank you...
Thank you for giving me reasons to live for
and thank you
Thank you for giving me dreams to live for

And I remember…
I remember. I was lonely, so sad, and blue
and you hold my hands and made me through.

So, if you need me or if someone hurts you
just call my name and I'll be there for you
and if you need me or if someone hurts you
just call my name and I'll be there for you.


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Comments please! Which version is more OK?

Last edited: 05-Jul-10 01:33 AM

 


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