Counting the time
Waiting for the crime
The loss of innocence
A faint reminiscence

I'm in the twilight
Surrounded by the night
The memories have been disgraced
The scene is still unchanged

The time is near
The message is clear
The battle will be fought
Fight now fear not

I keep still
I am trying to feel
The hate that's within you
I'going to win you

I was mistaken
I was forgotten
Unbroken silence
Absolute violence

I praise the song of defeat
I am the bottom and he's the summit
A sorrowful farewell
Where does salvation dwell?

Nice one indeed...Loved the use of short sentences...and such a vivid explanation of death...Nice one..:)
Nirman

AB_BELIAL ji!
good one. Liked it

damn, yaar bro pani poet po recha ta.

Bro ta full of surprises yaar. la la keep it coming bro.

Aaja bholi ta Poem lekhna pani waakai lagna thalyo vhanya :-)

Zindagi vhari Ko.....
Timrooo tyo, saath ko saapana
Saapana Adhurooo...
Adhurooo Rahi gayooooooo
Ti Kasam Ti baacha...
Aaune Bholi Ka Ti Aasha...
Adhuroo...
Adhuroo Rahi Gayoooooo
:-((