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 If i could make a wish ( poEM)
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Posted on 03-18-06 9:40 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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If I could make a wish
And have it last forever and a day,
I would take you in my arms
And this is where Id stay..
For theres no one else I know
That holds my heart like you,
And I know someday, baby,
You'll realize this is true.

If I could make a wish
Your lips would be on mine,
Id slowly sip and savor you
Like only the finest wine.
For theres no one else I know
That gives me so much pleasure,
And I know someday, baby,
You'll see that you're my treasure.

If I could make a wish
Our bodies would unite,
Theres nothing Id love more
Than making love all night.
For theres no one else I know
Who gives me passion like you do,
And I know someday, baby,
All my wishes will come true.

If I could make a wish
Id start by making things right,
Id take away all your doubts,
And hold you through the night.
For theres no one else I know
That means as much you see,
And I know someday, baby,
You'll learn to trust in me.

If I could make a wish.
It would be just you and me,
No worries in the world,
Just happy as can be.
For theres no one else I know
Who with me, makes the perfect rhyme,
And I know someday, baby,
In another place in time.

If I could make a wish
Id go to the next lifetime to be with you,
I know that you're my soul mate,
Theres no doubt I know its true.
For theres no one else I know
That is my destiny,
I know I'm meant for you,
And I know you're meant for me.
 
Posted on 03-18-06 11:00 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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ramro cha.
Love bug le tokyo? ;-p
 
Posted on 03-18-06 3:27 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nepali Soul - hmm..well you know the third stanza i guess, don't you think that should kinda of be at the end cause the last line says - All my wishes will come true, and the title of the poem is - If i could make a wish. Anyways, just a thought! other than that nice and also your rhyme scheme seems kinda of messed up in some parts ke, you might want to fix that ni! :) :) but i could be wrong or you could have done that on purpose to make your poem unique ke. :) :)
 
Posted on 03-18-06 5:52 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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नेपालि आत्मा,
यदि यो कबिता तपाईकै रचना हो भने 'वाह वाह'
तर मैले यो पहिल्यै अरु कतै पढेझैं लाग्यो। तपाईको आफ्नै नभए credit दिनुहोस्, तपाइको आफ्नै हो हो भने गुस्ताखी माफ हो
 
Posted on 03-18-06 7:35 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Dear Sajha Pals

Read my poem and make some comments
 


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