hey everybody..during the summer me and my brother made a movie for my job application. we used our friends as the actors and the only equipments we used were a camera and a stand. so here is the link check it out.. and comment on my youtube or email me abt ur views on the movies..honest comments are always appreciated.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yz8yF6kW75c

THERE IS NO SERIOUS STORYLINE IN THE MOVIE. THIS IS JUST AN ACTION MOVIE ...n just for pure entertainment. also we had problems with the sound so please read the subtitles to understand it. finally this is our first attempt in making movies so please enjoy it...

jai

oo also check out the bloopers from the movie

http://youtube.com/watch?v=_yooZPSzQQo

B.S.
if u dun know wat that means its BULL SHIT
no offense jus a waste of time

alright..that is appreciated..help me out man..how is it a waste of time???.

Movie review frm my friend Ashray (he sent me an email after he saw the movie)
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What the f*** was you doing on the screen.....
you f***ing break the intensity of all the drama...and what was that soundtrack
damn bamboozle shit all played out and dragged....you should have used more of garage band...you must have those on your iMAC...
and you need to have more of dialogues and more closeup shot of your players....

that is all the criticisms i have got ....everything else was perfect....
i mean i liked the car chases ...they all felt hollywood and shit..
and the gunfight and the ....everything else was great....
but you two shithead ruined the ending.

i mean i was like serious and shit and you two come dancing assholes....

anyway this was great but i think the bloopers video is gonna be even funn...

i will write shortly

dude bash i appreciate ur effort but still i would say that movie is BS..
there isn't any story neither moral in that.. jus a waste of23 mins.. kids playin wid toy gun....
if its a movie that u wannna make ... add some story instead of jus some ppl runnin around wid toys....
i do appreciate ur effort thoug. it probably took hell of a time n effort to edit n add music n so on........

thank u dude....don't get me wrong i am not saying u have to like my movie. People have their own opinion and so do u .but...thats all the explanation i need (i'll keep that in mind the next time i make a movie)....i know there is no story (i said that in the summary..) well..thats all i could do with $0 and a camera and 5 days of time ..but don't worry the next movie i 'll make will have an intresting story and every thing an audience wants...

one again thanks for watching and giving me honest comments..

Ps:- just leave me ur email add (to send u my next venture)...

peace

bash24 your movie was quite good for a short movie. Yet I have to tell you that I found it more comical rather tha an action movie. I guess this is your first one and you will soon be a great movie director in the future................It takes a lot of effort and time to create something like this..............I give you 10 pts for you and your actors efforts.I mean with no real proffesional training and equipment you pulled it off quite good...... but the movie was really looked like the plot was being made as the movie progressed any way great job and hope to see more work from you guys..............

thank you man

I appreciate your efforts. I found more than I expected before watching it. Keep it up and best wishes...! Study well....and make a good money!!

thank you

Great movie, a little funny, But EXCELLENT for guys like you... I bet you guys have choreographed better than many Nepali song music videos in Nepal...

thanks mann..i agree with u a little bit...i mean if i had the movie tools that the nepali filmmakers have i would take nepali movie industry to a whole another level..

..well these are just things to say..imean i am not getting those kind of opportunities anytime soon so

thanx for watching

sensational director in making..............................
best director of the year 2010 goes to bash.24
good effort

Good effort. But I think you went after the style (John Woo inspired?) and forgot that you are making a movie. I am sure you can do much better next time. Good luck.

. PLUS:
- Choreography was good.
- Background Music/Sound (during action) was chosen smartly (However, dude, beware of using copy-write protected materials).
- At least you guys tried.. Keep it up. Don't get discouraged by criticisms. (But don't neglect them either).

 MINUS:
- Your storyline is not conveyed as a whole.
- If you wanna give a sense of action/thrill, make the character's look appropriate.. (Hints: dont present your characters with clean shaved, chocolaty look with well done hair style and clean dress.. Rather present them in dark/brown/grey outfits, which are torned.. with folded sleeves..they should look very ROUGH.. -you can do it at $0. )
- In fighting/Action, no blood or any injury shown? Use some color, spray water (to show sweating - a symbol of stress in actor).. show some scartch on arms or face..(use lil bit make up at $0 ;)).. and make close up filming..

AND YEAH:- I did not see A Jolie No female character? I hope you will have that it too in your next adventure..

Overall Rating: Good initiative. Keep learning. Keep moive.

(mail me for more tips .. if interested.)

thank you for the reviews...KEEP IT COMING...it will help me

dude,
jumping on the couches and fighting in the verandas with Guns???
Car chase?? night or day???
the compo. of the scene where the guys come out near the dining table.. was okay but.. to hell with.. why shoot around the kitchen !!
Dint like it yet, but sure was a good try
keep it up!!

com on man...if i had all the cash the producers have in their pockets then u would be seeing my movie in the theatres (with action scenes that would beat any action movie till date).

anyway thanks for watching the movie..and for the comment too